the past three weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we have 2 comparlseys to complete which are both 3 stars worth then you also go to get 14 other stars to be finished literacy for the 3 weeks. So then when I finished my comparlsey task's I thought of doing a three star activity called famous landmarks. So then I had a quick read through the instructions, and it told me to add the name of the landmark aswell as look at the lankmark picture then add where its from, dimentons and 3 intresting facts about the landmarks. I extremly think that I had done well on this task but one thing stand outs to me that i could of improved on is making sure that the one landmark that I got wrong could of been better reaserached. Here is my work down below for you to have a look at.
Monday, August 30, 2021
famous landmarks blogpost
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Kia ora Jamie
ReplyDeleteYou did a really great job reading the instructions and seeing that you needed to use notes for the interesting facts. You definitely did this which made your work easy to read. To improve your post, you could check through what you have written on your blog (or get your chromebook to read out what you have written) just to make sure that it makes sense all the way through and that your punctuation is correct. Well done for the detail you have added to this post - keep up the great blogging!