Reducing Litter in NZ

The past few days we have been doing a Literacy Theme called Exploring The Ocean. How this work's is we have 20 stars to complete on our literacy site over three weeks. Stars means completed task and count for points. Out of the tasks I chose to do a Persuasive Writing task. I think that I went well with this piece of writing, but one thing to improve on is adding more puncuation end editing. 

So what you had to do for this task is pick a topic and Persuade them about the chosen task, by writing a page worth of writing.

Here is my work down below: My topic was Reducing Littering in NZ. 

Thanks for reading my blogpost. If you could please give some feedback that would be much apperciated. Thanks Jamie.

quiz blogpost

 the past few days we have started a new literacy theme which is exiting our new literacy theme is now currently called exploring the ocean. We have a range of 20 and over task on our literacy site but we only need 20 stars in three weeks time, stars means taks completed. So the first task I chose to do is the task im blogposting now which is called what am I quiz. What we had to do is read the clues on the slides and the awnser what sea creature it is. With this piece of work I completed overall I think I did'nt go to bad, but one thing I could improve on is making my awnsers in bold and in a nicley formed font.

here is my work for you to have a look at. 

thanks so much for listing to my blogpost it will be much appericated if you could please give me some feed back on how I went with this blogpost 

thanks jamie

famous landmarks blogpost

 the past three weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we have 2 comparlseys to complete which are both 3 stars worth then you also go to get 14 other stars to be finished literacy for the 3 weeks. So then when I finished my comparlsey task's I thought of doing a three star activity called famous landmarks. So then I had a quick read through the instructions, and it told me to add the name of the landmark aswell as look at the lankmark picture then add where its from, dimentons and 3 intresting facts about the landmarks. I extremly think that I had done well on this task but one thing stand outs to me that i could of improved on is making sure that the one landmark that I got wrong could of been better reaserached. Here is my work down below for you to have a look at.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went with my blogpost that would be much apperciated thanks jamie 

attribute organiser blogpost

 the past 2 weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we had a to do 20 stars by the end of three weeks so then I chose to do an complasery task which was called an attribute organiser now how this works is you have to list notes in the blank spots and write awnsers down in notes. One thing im proud of is making my words into good quality notes, but now one thing I could improove on is making the facts more intesting here is my work down below.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie.

my poster blogpost

 the past 2 weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called Olympics the reason why we are doing Olympics is because the Olympics has ended just now but when we started the Olympics it was live. we have over 20 task to do but when you reach to 20 task you can be done if you don't want to do more. Their are 2 compalserys. I chose to do a poster out of the 20 task and what you have to do is add pictures/backround and you also have to add writing. here is my work down below.

 

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie.

my poster blogpost

 The past week we have been doing a literacy theme called Olympics. The reason why we are doing Olympics is because it is live right now in Tokyo and it only happens every 4 years so that's why we are doing Olympics for literacy. So what is expected from our teachers is 20 stars by the end of 3 weeks so I have been looking at our activities and chose to do a compulsory one witch means you have to do it we have 2 compulsory in this theme and the compulsory that I done is a poster about a weird sport that was in the Olympics so that got me thinking about race walking so that was my topic for my poster. For a poster you have to write some sort of information about your topic add color and also some pictures and a big bold headline at the top. I think that I went well with this poster but one thing I could improve on is remembering how to do a poster. here is an example on how to do a poster here is mine down below.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks Jamie.😊

attribute organsier blogpost

 the past week and 4 days we have been doing our own literacy theme called create your own theme. This was different but i like it better then the teachers creating a theme for us. For my theme i chose to do sport and I chose to do create an attribute organiser so what i had to do is fill in the blank spots and put questions in there then after that I had to awnser them so thats what i had to do for the attribute organiser. Overall I think that i've done well on this attribute organsier but one thing i could improove on is making the questions a bit harder. 

here is my work down below for you to have a look at.

thank-you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks bye jamie.