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Wednesday, November 24, 2021

vision of my future blogpost

 The past week we have started a new literacy theme called My working life. I thought that it would be   really intresting to see what the task are like. In 3 weeks we have to get 20 stars ( stars means task ) so then I thought to do a 2 star task this task is called vision of my future all you have to do for this task is fill in the gaps it's pretty straight foward. I think I done well on explaining my message to my family but one thing to improve on is putting a little bit more detail into my work.


thank you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie 

Thursday, September 23, 2021

Word puzzle blogpost

 the past 2 weeks and 4 days we have been doing a literacy theme called exploring the ocean. We have to   get 20 stars in 3 weeks time [stars means task completed] so then I chose to do an 1 star activity which is called Ocean word puzzle. For this task it was more like questions but at the same time it also felt like a word puzzle. With this task I think I done well but one thing to improve on is making my awnsers in colorful and bold words. 


here is my work for you to have a look at 


thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be much appericated. 
Thanks jamie.

Wednesday, September 8, 2021

for and against blogpost

 the past few days we have started a new literacy theme called exploring the ocean. We have to get 20 task     completed in 3 weeks time. So then I chose to do a 2 star task which means it's worth 2 task. The 2 star activity was called for and against. What we had to do is write an aguement on why plastic should be bannned in new zealand and why it shoud'nt. For this activity I think I done a strong argument on why it should be banned and why it shoud not be banned. One thing to improve on is having much more different ideas.

here is my work for you to have a look at.





thanks for listening to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks Jamie.















Tuesday, September 7, 2021

Reducing Litter in NZ

The past few days we have been doing a Literacy Theme called Exploring The Ocean. How this work's is we have 20 stars to complete on our literacy site over three weeks. Stars means completed task and count for points. Out of the tasks I chose to do a Persuasive Writing task. I think that I went well with this piece of writing, but one thing to improve on is adding more puncuation end editing. 

So what you had to do for this task is pick a topic and Persuade them about the chosen task, by writing a page worth of writing.

Here is my work down below: My topic was Reducing Littering in NZ. 






Thanks for reading my blogpost. If you could please give some feedback that would be much apperciated. Thanks Jamie.

quiz blogpost

 the past few days we have started a new literacy theme which is exiting our new literacy theme is now currently called exploring the ocean. We have a range of 20 and over task on our literacy site but we only need 20 stars in three weeks time, stars means taks completed. So the first task I chose to do is the task im blogposting now which is called what am I quiz. What we had to do is read the clues on the slides and the awnser what sea creature it is. With this piece of work I completed overall I think I did'nt go to bad, but one thing I could improve on is making my awnsers in bold and in a nicley formed font.

here is my work for you to have a look at. 





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thanks jamie


Monday, August 30, 2021

famous landmarks blogpost

 the past three weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we have 2 comparlseys to complete which are both 3 stars worth then you also go to get 14 other stars to be finished literacy for the 3 weeks. So then when I finished my comparlsey task's I thought of doing a three star activity called famous landmarks. So then I had a quick read through the instructions, and it told me to add the name of the landmark aswell as look at the lankmark picture then add where its from, dimentons and 3 intresting facts about the landmarks. I extremly think that I had done well on this task but one thing stand outs to me that i could of improved on is making sure that the one landmark that I got wrong could of been better reaserached. Here is my work down below for you to have a look at.




thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went with my blogpost that would be much apperciated thanks jamie 

Thursday, August 26, 2021

attribute organiser blogpost

 the past 2 weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we had a to do 20 stars by the end of three weeks so then I chose to do an complasery task which was called an attribute organiser now how this works is you have to list notes in the blank spots and write awnsers down in notes. One thing im proud of is making my words into good quality notes, but now one thing I could improove on is making the facts more intesting here is my work down below.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie.






Tuesday, August 10, 2021

my poster blogpost

 the past 2 weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called Olympics the reason why we are doing Olympics is because the Olympics has ended just now but when we started the Olympics it was live. we have over 20 task to do but when you reach to 20 task you can be done if you don't want to do more. Their are 2 compalserys. I chose to do a poster out of the 20 task and what you have to do is add pictures/backround and you also have to add writing. here is my work down below.


 


thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie.

Saturday, July 31, 2021

my poster blogpost

 The past week we have been doing a literacy theme called Olympics. The reason why we are doing Olympics is because it is live right now in Tokyo and it only happens every 4 years so that's why we are doing Olympics for literacy. So what is expected from our teachers is 20 stars by the end of 3 weeks so I have been looking at our activities and chose to do a compulsory one witch means you have to do it we have 2 compulsory in this theme and the compulsory that I done is a poster about a weird sport that was in the Olympics so that got me thinking about race walking so that was my topic for my poster. For a poster you have to write some sort of information about your topic add color and also some pictures and a big bold headline at the top. I think that I went well with this poster but one thing I could improve on is remembering how to do a poster. here is an example on how to do a poster here is mine down below.


thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks Jamie.😊

Thursday, July 1, 2021

attribute organsier blogpost

 the past week and 4 days we have been doing our own literacy theme called create your own theme. This was different but i like it better then the teachers creating a theme for us. For my theme i chose to do sport and I chose to do create an attribute organiser so what i had to do is fill in the blank spots and put questions in there then after that I had to awnser them so thats what i had to do for the attribute organiser. Overall I think that i've done well on this attribute organsier but one thing i could improove on is making the questions a bit harder. 

here is my work down below for you to have a look at.




thank-you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks bye jamie.





Wednesday, June 30, 2021

blog post poster 4a

 the past week we have been doing our literacy theme called create your own theme now this was diferent when we first started it but i started to get usd to it. My theme that  I chose is called sport the reason why I chose that theme is beacuse I love sport and I have been doing sport for a few years now. I chose to create a poster about basketball, and what you have to do to create the poster is write a few sentences about basketball maybe based on some rules, also you have to find some pictures to match with your writing so the poster goes together well. One thing that I think that i've done well is explaining the rules of basketball, but one thing I could improove on is telling a bit more rules to basketball but overall i think that i've done well on this poster that i've created.

here is my work down below for you to have a look at.




thank-you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how i went that would be great thanks. jamie 

Friday, June 25, 2021

blogpost sport slide

 the past 4 days we have been doing something different for literacy the theme is called create your own theme now this was a shock to me and i created a few task and what you have to do is create a topic to do literacy on and i chose sport for my topic. Now i chose to do an activity called sport slide and what i chose for you to do is awnser questions that i put on the google slide these questions are not hard they are based on rugby, cricket, basketball, soccer and netball. One thing that I think i've i done well is creating the questions and letting people awnsering them. One thing I could improove on is making the questions a bit harder.

here is my work down below.



 


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Thursday, June 3, 2021

My poster 1d blogpost

 the past week we have been doing a literacy theme called matariki. We have a slide full of activitys and we get to choose one of them to do I chose to do a poster. And this poster was based on how other countrys celebrate matariki, so all you have to do is go onto the website when you click the link and you read the text and write some things about how other countrys celebrate matariki. I think I done well by adding some intresting facts on what they do to celebrate matariki. one thing I could improove on is adding more colour to my poster. Here is my work down below.




if you could please give me some feedback on how i went with my blogpost that would be great thanks bye jamie.

Monday, May 31, 2021

my maori calender blogpost

 the past week we have been doing a literacy theme called matariki. We have a slide full of activitys we get to choose from so i chose a three star activity witch is called maori calender.What we had to do is write all months in english then write them all in maori then you explain what the weather is like during those months. I think i done well on the maori calendar cause i explained well. One thing i could improove on is explaining the weather i bit better here is my work down below.


 


if you could please give me some feedback on how i went that would be great thanks. jamie 

jacinda adern letter blogpost

 the last week we have been doing a literacy the called matatriki. We have slide full of activitys and we get to choose an activity to do,i chose one of the comparlsey ones and that comparlsey one was a jacinda adern letter that i had to do. So what you have to do for this pitictular letter is put your adress and what suberb you live in and what city you live in and also the date and your city number. Then you go to write you two main paragraphs then finish with a conclusion,then say kind regrads or yours faithfully with your name underneath the kind regards or yours faithfully. I am really proud of myself with this letter i think i done well on persudaing her i think i need to improve on putting in more puncuation in my letter but one thing i did actully learn was that it is that important to keep the memory of matariki in your head. Here is my work for you to have a look at 

if you could please give me some feedback on how i went that would be great thanks bye. jamie



Wednesday, May 26, 2021

attributte organiser blogpost


the past three weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called strange animals we have choices on the literacy slide of what to do i chose to do one of the comparlsey task it was called an attributte organiser and what you had to do is reserach and find adaptions and explain the adaptio  for each animal on the document you can see how i explained the adaptions up on the doc one thing i could of done better is explain more exiting facts but i think i have done well cause i have explained the adaptions well.
if you could please give me some feedback on how i went that would be great thanks bye jamie. 







Friday, April 16, 2021

how to spot fake news poster

The past 3 weeks we have been working on a literacy theme called video games now i have been working on a poster and what i had to do on that poser was, giving tips on how to spot fake new i think i had done well on that poster that i had done but i could improove on some things like giving some more tips and more advice but overall i think that i done well here is my work down below.

if you could please give me some feedback on how i went on my poster that would be fantastic thanks goodbye.

Thursday, March 4, 2021

teamwork poster

 for the past week and 4 days our class we have been working on a theme called americas cup we have to do task to get stars i have done a teamwork poster what you had to do for a teamwork poster is give tips of what is good teamwork here is my poster 




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