vision of my future blogpost

 The past week we have started a new literacy theme called My working life. I thought that it would be   really intresting to see what the task are like. In 3 weeks we have to get 20 stars ( stars means task ) so then I thought to do a 2 star task this task is called vision of my future all you have to do for this task is fill in the gaps it's pretty straight foward. I think I done well on explaining my message to my family but one thing to improve on is putting a little bit more detail into my work.

thank you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie 

Word puzzle blogpost

 the past 2 weeks and 4 days we have been doing a literacy theme called exploring the ocean. We have to   get 20 stars in 3 weeks time [stars means task completed] so then I chose to do an 1 star activity which is called Ocean word puzzle. For this task it was more like questions but at the same time it also felt like a word puzzle. With this task I think I done well but one thing to improve on is making my awnsers in colorful and bold words. 

here is my work for you to have a look at 

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be much appericated. 

Thanks jamie.

for and against blogpost

 the past few days we have started a new literacy theme called exploring the ocean. We have to get 20 task     completed in 3 weeks time. So then I chose to do a 2 star task which means it's worth 2 task. The 2 star activity was called for and against. What we had to do is write an aguement on why plastic should be bannned in new zealand and why it shoud'nt. For this activity I think I done a strong argument on why it should be banned and why it shoud not be banned. One thing to improve on is having much more different ideas.

here is my work for you to have a look at.

thanks for listening to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks Jamie.

Reducing Litter in NZ

The past few days we have been doing a Literacy Theme called Exploring The Ocean. How this work's is we have 20 stars to complete on our literacy site over three weeks. Stars means completed task and count for points. Out of the tasks I chose to do a Persuasive Writing task. I think that I went well with this piece of writing, but one thing to improve on is adding more puncuation end editing. 

So what you had to do for this task is pick a topic and Persuade them about the chosen task, by writing a page worth of writing.

Here is my work down below: My topic was Reducing Littering in NZ. 

Thanks for reading my blogpost. If you could please give some feedback that would be much apperciated. Thanks Jamie.

quiz blogpost

 the past few days we have started a new literacy theme which is exiting our new literacy theme is now currently called exploring the ocean. We have a range of 20 and over task on our literacy site but we only need 20 stars in three weeks time, stars means taks completed. So the first task I chose to do is the task im blogposting now which is called what am I quiz. What we had to do is read the clues on the slides and the awnser what sea creature it is. With this piece of work I completed overall I think I did'nt go to bad, but one thing I could improve on is making my awnsers in bold and in a nicley formed font.

here is my work for you to have a look at. 

thanks so much for listing to my blogpost it will be much appericated if you could please give me some feed back on how I went with this blogpost 

thanks jamie

famous landmarks blogpost

 the past three weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we have 2 comparlseys to complete which are both 3 stars worth then you also go to get 14 other stars to be finished literacy for the 3 weeks. So then when I finished my comparlsey task's I thought of doing a three star activity called famous landmarks. So then I had a quick read through the instructions, and it told me to add the name of the landmark aswell as look at the lankmark picture then add where its from, dimentons and 3 intresting facts about the landmarks. I extremly think that I had done well on this task but one thing stand outs to me that i could of improved on is making sure that the one landmark that I got wrong could of been better reaserached. Here is my work down below for you to have a look at.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went with my blogpost that would be much apperciated thanks jamie 

attribute organiser blogpost

 the past 2 weeks we have been doing a literacy theme called choice countries. we had a to do 20 stars by the end of three weeks so then I chose to do an complasery task which was called an attribute organiser now how this works is you have to list notes in the blank spots and write awnsers down in notes. One thing im proud of is making my words into good quality notes, but now one thing I could improove on is making the facts more intesting here is my work down below.

thanks for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie.