The past two weeks we have been learning about insects and bugs. At the moment I have been working on my group writing doc which is above.
It would be very good if you could give me some feedback on my work, thank-you.
Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
The past two weeks we have been learning about insects and bugs. At the moment I have been working on my group writing doc which is above.
It would be very good if you could give me some feedback on my work, thank-you.