The past week we have started a new literacy theme called My working life. I thought that it would be really intresting to see what the task are like. In 3 weeks we have to get 20 stars ( stars means task ) so then I thought to do a 2 star task this task is called vision of my future all you have to do for this task is fill in the gaps it's pretty straight foward. I think I done well on explaining my message to my family but one thing to improve on is putting a little bit more detail into my work.
thank you for listing to my blogpost if you could please give me some feedback on how I went that would be great thanks jamie
